House of Lost Dreams

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House of Lost Dreams

orenotter
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Apr 19 2013, 04:06 AM #1

Izzy has asked me to make a post for her because she cannot remember her password.

She is planning to change HLD and she wants opinions on the best format, both physically and in terms of writing.
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The J.A.M.
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Apr 19 2013, 05:14 AM #2

Can we see the previous strips to compare?
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Apr 24 2013, 04:40 PM #3

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The J.A.M.
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Apr 24 2013, 08:36 PM #4

It looks like the only digital parts are the text.

The marker coloring looks okay, but perhaps she should use straight lines between the panels.

I also see the text boxes were placed over the original handwritten text.

Depending on how quickly she wants the strips to be posted, if she wants to take time, she should keep the manual coloring, if not, she should switch to digital color and thinner outlines.

The text doesn't have to be digital. Just about every artist writes it by hand, but beforehand they draw lines so that the text is written straight.
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